tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8738684298185884058.post6584327480942115378..comments2024-03-01T01:51:28.394-08:00Comments on Joy McCullough, MG & YA author: The Query That Got Me My AgentJoy McCullough-Carranzahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09499534418217657768noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8738684298185884058.post-37349430923734096362015-09-15T16:05:33.969-07:002015-09-15T16:05:33.969-07:00Great query! This sounds like a wonderful story. B...Great query! This sounds like a wonderful story. Best of luck with it and thanks for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8738684298185884058.post-85356909853180101102014-08-23T15:24:28.599-07:002014-08-23T15:24:28.599-07:00It is much trickier, but I love those quieter stor...It is much trickier, but I love those quieter stories myself!Joy McCullough-Carranzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09499534418217657768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8738684298185884058.post-68012870957889577332014-08-23T15:24:08.268-07:002014-08-23T15:24:08.268-07:00You're so welcome! Thank you!You're so welcome! Thank you!Joy McCullough-Carranzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09499534418217657768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8738684298185884058.post-89655588250941060792014-08-23T15:23:56.717-07:002014-08-23T15:23:56.717-07:00Thanks, Shari! So glad it was helpful!Thanks, Shari! So glad it was helpful!Joy McCullough-Carranzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09499534418217657768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8738684298185884058.post-62411851467779544312014-08-23T15:10:30.507-07:002014-08-23T15:10:30.507-07:00Thanks so much for sharing. This example helps. It...Thanks so much for sharing. This example helps. It is harder to show stakes with a more quiet story.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14800038834357995493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8738684298185884058.post-12675157278936459202014-08-22T15:28:11.437-07:002014-08-22T15:28:11.437-07:00This is wonderful! Thank you so much for sharing t...This is wonderful! Thank you so much for sharing this! The stakes are clear, the voice is present, and the details adorable!E.G. Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16153333964618890260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8738684298185884058.post-83429909990921947432014-08-22T15:12:03.110-07:002014-08-22T15:12:03.110-07:00Love it! Interesting characters, and the stakes ar...Love it! Interesting characters, and the stakes are so clear. (I have a hard time really making the stakes clear in my "quiet" stories -- this is a great example for me. Thanks for posting it!)<br /><br />Shari Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12495151345889657066noreply@blogger.com